eternity – poem
sometimes I still feel your presence
daybreak silent winds
alive though you have gone
immortal memory
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sometimes I still feel your presence
daybreak silent winds
alive though you have gone
immortal memory
bwfiction 
I know this feeling so well. Beautiful.
thanks for reading- Haiku’s are so full of emotion
so much emotion packed into three short lines; very well done, Bill
Thanks Tony!
You have expressed very strong feelings of loss and pain within these few lines!
Very nice contrasts in this senryu filled with pain..
i agree…succinct but with feeling.
even the winds silenced as well.
thanks –
Sublime – thank you
thanks for your comment, it is nice to have my words read.
A very fine expression of loss and coping that is universal.
only the loss of what we love can harm us.
“silent winds” … a sweet breeze that gently lifts is like a caress of a memory. Lovely.
thanks – I am always thrilled when poetry connects…
Sensitive expression of dealing with loss. Very nice.
thanks VB