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eternity – poem

October 18, 2012

sometimes I still feel your presence

daybreak silent winds
alive though you have gone
immortal memory

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From → haiku, poetry

16 Comments
  1. I know this feeling so well. Beautiful.

  2. so much emotion packed into three short lines; very well done, Bill

  3. You have expressed very strong feelings of loss and pain within these few lines!

  4. Very nice contrasts in this senryu filled with pain..

  5. i agree…succinct but with feeling.
    even the winds silenced as well.

  6. Sublime – thank you

  7. A very fine expression of loss and coping that is universal.

  8. “silent winds” … a sweet breeze that gently lifts is like a caress of a memory. Lovely.

  9. Sensitive expression of dealing with loss. Very nice.

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