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stars – noku

June 19, 2015

brilliant stars guided
intrepid men and women
even beyond the clouds

almost a haiku

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From → haiku, poetry

6 Comments
  1. Yes – I agree with Redgladiola – you should consider this haiku. There are several ways to read this 🙂

    • Thanks Jen – when a poem reaches someone on more than one level, I feel like it has worked.

  2. I think it still counts as one. Lovely. =)

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