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hair – dverse

January 28, 2015

Hip to hip
Yet we remain
a hairbreadth apart

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From → dverse, poetry

20 Comments
  1. doveinthedungeon permalink

    Several ways to interpret this — very clever — !!! πŸ™‚

  2. Oh this is really nice! πŸ™‚

  3. Profound really.

  4. Very interesting πŸ˜€

  5. ha. a hairsbreadth still leaves space
    for something to come between…

  6. Waxing can take care of that. πŸ˜‰

  7. Very clever! Love the alliteration of hip to hip and hairbreadth πŸ™‚

  8. My imagination is running wild πŸ™‚

  9. Nobody asked what kind of hair…

  10. There should always be some distance. Hairbreadth is enough.

  11. Even a haibreadth can be too far πŸ™‚

  12. i’ve been in this smallest space of human separation that is so far in metaphor to me.. in the way i see your words from my past where the closest of connections never made it farther than a ‘hairbreadth’.. of what love means to me.. now.. in truly losing that hairbreadth of distance that means humanity to me…:)

  13. close enough! Hairbreadth is good πŸ™‚ clever

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