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marionettes – dverse

December 10, 2013

The music stops and
Marionettes tenuously sway
Depending upon the steadying
Embrace of love

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From → dverse, poetry

24 Comments
  1. I like that concept of keeping the music playing, letting the love dance on. Well done.!

  2. ramblingsfromamum permalink

    ahh but to be the one who controls the strings ~ the most important ~ smiles – lovely imagery

  3. Depending upon the steadying
    Embrace of love…. oh don’t we just all…. i can think of no better stabilizer….nice…

  4. In a way we all depend on the steadying embrace of love, I think. Well penned.

  5. Very unique. πŸ™‚

  6. Makes me self conscious of my hands which may be slightly shaking. Last line brings relief.

  7. I so loved this!!

  8. For me the word – marionette – says much πŸ™‚

  9. yes, we are marionettes in tenuous sway to love…this says much in so few words about the power and need for love.

  10. as with most things
    depending on love
    it is interesting you chose marionettes
    as the vehicle, which hinges on control

  11. Oh this was very nice.. the image of marionettes swaying.. very interesting.

  12. Beautiful!

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